Those Days!
Those Days! . A Poem By Amit Makwana
When I think back,
I can feel those days,
flirting with my senses…
Those sensations,
shaking me up to the heavens…
Those blissful experiences,
showering happiness...
Those ecstasies,
making me crazy, days and nights…
Those Days!
Can they come back?
When I look back,
I can see those days,
flashing with rosy moments…
Those instants,
full of life, radiating love streams…
Those rays,
going through my heart thousand times…
Those seasons,
flourishing in my mind for years…
Those Days!
Can they come back?
When I move back,
I can live again those days,
breathing your presences…
Those wonderful aura,
breezing into my open arms…
Those hugs and kisses,
keeping me alive in crowds…
Those people,
witnessing our intense affections…
Those Days!
Can they come back?
Those Days!
Please come back…
By AMIT MAKWANA
2007-03-17
Inspired by the great photo 'Those Days' by Javi!
{http://www.flickr.com/photos/ciberia/420396085}
12 comments:
Ooooh Amit!!! Deep thanks for your poem, I find it wonderful and makes me remeber why sometimes a really love to be part of flickr :-D I'm absolutely honored!
thanks a lot Javi for inspiring me to write, with ur amazing photo! Still i am under the effect of that great capture! Yeah, in any community, u will always find like-mided people, who turn into friends, sometimes!
take care n have fun!
Hiii Amit,
How r u doing?
This is such a lovely poem :)Everything u write is so easy to associate.
Jus a small que, sometimes Y is that 2 people fail to recreate the magic of those days if they cherish it so much.
Love,Live,Laughter
Lust4Life
hi Lust4Life!
i am fine n doing great! thanks dear for ur kind words!
many times, two people fail to recreate the magic of those days, even if they cherish it so much, because they don't believe that it is possible! they are afraid of failures! beliving in all your desires and dreams, leads you to the successes!
take care n have faith n have fun!
Hello Amit
nice poem buddy, made me remember of my memories, those days that i want to come back:((
ur poem is so touching...very nice:))
byeee
take care
keep smiling:))
thanks a lot Deeps for ur kind words!
v all love to cherish our good times! hope n wish everyone on this earth a very best time! may god bless everyone with lots of joy n love!
take care n have fun!
ooo thas cho chwweeet ..
seems like u were nostaligc and u made us all that too
waise all thanks for tht ... love to be roam in my past moments...
very beautiful amit ....
awesome piece of poem was your second paragraph ...
good going
keep em coming dear
hi Tina!
thanks for ur kind words dear!
love is charismatic! isn'i it?
i will continue, writing about love! i am in love with LOVE!
take care n have fun!
Hello, Amit,
'enjoyed this poem lots! lol we should have collaborated on this --- with my story wrapping up in the end with your lovely poem! That would have been fantastic! :-)
Btw, thanks for dropping by the blog and leaving your wonderful message. Very generous words. I'll take that as a compliment from you. Thank you so much!
Take care, won't you? Wish you all the best in life. May God bless you and your family. Bye for a bit!
hi Ellen!
thanks for ur kind words!
u can post my poem at the end of ur lovely love story! lets make it fantastic!
i believe, its u, being generous, sharing all ur lovely thoughts and experiences with us!
always, looking forward to you!
take care n have fun!
Hi Amit,
lovely poem as usual.
reminded me of the Engelbert no. "Those were the days my friend........"
keep gonig...vs
thanks a lot Vijay for ur kind words!
take care n have fun!
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