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2009-01-30

give me more as its love ' poem

give me more as its love ' poem
give me more as its love
give me more as its love . A Poem By Amit Makwana

ooh hoo!
can see you with my eyes closed
can hold you with my arms folded
can kiss you with my lips locked
can dance with you with my legs halted

ooh hoo!
can see you in mirrors and beyond
can feel you in droplets of my pond
can wear you and have you inside
can feel you while stepping outside

oh my dear!
i am coming to you my darling
hugging you my love charming
heavenly i feel whenever with you
nothing more i need except you
give me more as its love
give me more as its love


ooh hoo!
give me more as its love
give me more as its love

oh my love!
love you so much and you know it
you drive me crazy and you do it
whenever with you, i give my best
with your love pouring on, i just rest
give me more as its love
give me more as its love


ooh hoo!
give me more as its love
give me more as its love


By AMIT MAKWANA
30-01-2009

6 comments:

Ellen said...

Hi Amit,

I think this is right on target with the feelings.. or emotion. :-)

Regards to the family.
May God continue to bless you and everyone in your home.

Ellen

AmitMakwana said...

thanks Ellen...
i tried to make as simple as possible with lot of feelings...

Mónica Zúñiga said...

I loved your blog, so full of wisdom and inspiration! :)

Blessings! Moni.

AmitMakwana said...

thanks Moni...
u have the artist in you, to discover the art around...
best wishes...

Anonymous said...

I love this poem,

Astrid

AmitMakwana said...

thank u very much Astrid...

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